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Santa

by Shane P.6

Once upon a time there was a little boy called Jack. Jack and his friend Shane decided to go for a walk in the snowy wood. When they left it was one o'clock. They said to Jack's mum, "We will be back at five o'clock". When they got to the wood it was two o'clock so they had to be quick.

They got lost then they saw a little wooden cottage they wood looked old and soft but it was really strong. They knocked on the door there was no reply so they walked in it was very warm and surprisingly spacious. They saw elves working everywhere some up on the balcony some down below around big tables covered with tools and toys. Shane said, "Where is the boss?"

The head elf said "In there" as he pointed to a small ornate wooden door. They walked in. There was an old plump man with a white beard. They asked, "Can we stay because it is frizzing out side". The old man said, "Yes". Jack said to the man, "Are you Santa?" The man said "yes." We had pizza for are dinner. "

It was delicious," we both said. We slept in king size beds and they were really comfortable. When it was morning we went to the Christmas sports day with Santa. In basketball it was the reindeer vs. snowmen. The reindeer won 100 to 99. Then it was the bobsleigh race. Spick the snowman won the race by a half mile. The next event was the toy football match when the toy soldiers vs. the toy dinosaurs. I was shouting, "Go on the dinosaurs". Santa was shouting, "go on the soldiers." The dinosaurs won 5 to 2.

We went home after that. Santa gave us a basketball each. Our mum's asked us, "Were, were you?" We said, "The best place on earth."

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